FILE: Bug Hunter DATE: 2020-09-18 ARCHIVED: 2020-10-01 (c) Copyright Brett Paufler # # # # # # # # # # # # # # This is a novel that will not be. It is a story in my head... mostly. It is a framework... more-or-less complete. But I do not wish to spend the time (days, weeks, and/or months) required to fill this out. I want to do it short form... of which this present form is a highly inferior first step. But one needs to start somewhere. # # # # # # # # # # # # # # {My Standard Syntax Would Have Curly Braces Denoting After The Fact Explanatory Comments} : I will use comments trailing a colon in this document. Which is to say, the original forms a subject heading... for the most. Eh, I am sure I will mix the two. # # # # # # # # # # # # # # Bug Hunter: I do not recall the original name. This revised name comes from a desire to mix-in Insect/Sex vignettes... to explore the Insect Fetish Space. Linear Main: As follows is the main loop. It is linear track, looping back to the beginning at the end. Come Down Young: Essentially the story Life: Sight unseen Dose Old Loop Back: In the background, as another. The story is from a young boy's point of view, who remembers the memories of an old man, who was that boy, perhaps countless times before. It is a loop, after all. Circle: I thought about twisting this around multiple times. But in the end, I believe this will work better if the cirlce loops (and/or circles) in tandem with the main loop (as a sort of harmonic). Essentially, it is an inner circle, telling of a young man's ( fake) break-in/robbery of another's house. Basement (break in, spider lab, spider, web): The Boy and Girl (for we need a girl for a Sex Story) break into a house through the basement, but boy may be House Sitting (and so, have a key and right to access, making the break-in a bit of pretend play). Landing (Date - Start End): These are the different rooms in a house. And although the story started mainly in two rooms, looping through all is where this ended up. Master Bedroom: This is decorated in wild jungle snake skins and a DMT hit ends the Linear Loop sending the boy and girl back to The Boy's Room. His (Snakes, bunk, dormitory): The start. Various sex scenes take place in the different rooms. I guess I'll detail that below. Hers (Spider, rope work, posing front of mirror): This is both a room in a house and Her Room as a child in another house... much like the Boy's Room. Neural Toxin. Causes Stroke like deformation. Spider or Snake. It's food comes from mushroom/flower eating. 6 to 12. 6 makes 12. Add reactants in spider. 12 to poison. Syphon off 6. {We need a source of DMT or similar Neural-Toxin to make the main loop. Some sources provide a Six Chain Whatever, which naturally has a Twelve Chain Whatever as the main Go Juice. So, use Six to make Twelve and drain off the Six.} Mushroom {low dose inside, high dose as red specks on top}. Mite {eats mushroom, has red specks on back, the red specks are the good stuff}. Spider {mouth lined from red from eating mites}. 6-12/12 {this is just one pathway, one source of the good stuff} Snake. 6-12 Full compliment: Snake venom is another source. And although the mushroom can be eaten whole, it's a second rate way to fly. Smoking dried snake venom (pouches extracted whole) would act similarly to a whole mushroom. In short (and once again) get enough of the Six Polymer together and some portion turns to the Twelve Polymer. The Twelve is the good stuff. But the Six is not without its merits. Six = High. Twelve = Loop... essentially a time travel through the mind, looping back to the same mind at a previous time when the drug was ingested (smoked, primarily), but one can cut new pathways. # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # # {As follows is a raw list of rooms (from the original file), but I had some ideas...} --HOUSE-- Straw: This is what I am calling the main loop, smoke through a straw, travel down the time-loop back to one's younger self as a tunnel... a straw. We start here with an interior dialogue, an explanation of what is to come. The interior dialogue is the story, spurting one out of the straw on the last page wherever a reader wishes to go... Boy's Room: This is the start, where he got high the first time, where he ends up the last. But really, it is his girlfriend who is getting high... no it has to be him for the loop. He has snakes. There are bondage fantasies... snake den sex. At some point, we have them playing Slaughter Quest and the drug is a poison exercise, "See, it would knock you out." And since they are playing, the next step is some quest... rob something... a jewel. Backyard: The Boy's Room and main house are connected by a yard (which backs onto an exterior public open space), which might as well be a swamp and the source for all the medicinal plants and animals. Basement: Think of it as a Mad Scientists Playground with cages spiders and snakes along with distilling equipment. In the first loop, the break in, the couple comes home, and the boy and girl peer up from the basement through a crack in the wall or stairs into the landing, watching the others, the older versions of themselves, wherein a good bit of sexual bondage takes place with her staring at a spider's web, caught, trapped... with no way forward or back. Entry: Where the couple comes in from the night, where the Boy picks up the girl from her house. Front/Garage: I don't have a lot here. I was filling out the house, making it complete. But these are the order the rooms are walked through in story land. So, we can have car games. We go In Entry and Out Entry. Girl's Room: She has this decorated like a Spider's web. In truth, I expanded this story too far in my mind and it needs to be contracted. Anyhow, if she is the Black Widow in His Room, in this room, it is she who is trapped in a web like cocoon... and on retrospect the metaphor might work best with the roles reversed, him in charge in his room, her in hers. Living/Kitchen: I like the idea of her being a Ballet Dancer of sorts and so, she poses in the Living Room. Think of a Spider Bite that causes paralysis... and from there we have a Statue Dance. There's not much expansion for the Kitchen. I'd still have to work it out. Master: The Couple enters and goes up to the Master Bedroom, releasing the girl and boy from basement, allowing them to escape, go back to The Girl's Room, somehow get back here (at a later point in time), where they smoke some of the stuff left by their older selves, repeating the loop. Bathroom: At this point, I'd just delete. # # # # # # # # # # # # # # {Is that clear?} {An overriding fear, concern, or whatever is that the Old Couple is stealing the life force of the younger, transferring their souls, it's not a loop, its a transfer.} {Also, I want to add another twist, so the Boy is Cursed, "Dead at 26," so he goes into loop returning to youth just before his 26th birthday. But somewhere discovers he can enter the loop after his 26th Birthday, to his 27th, and so is only dead at the age of 26, i.e. he does not exist.} {Anyway, that's that.} {To make it better, I have to take stuff out... reduce the story to a poem or something, as I am simply not writing this out long-form as a novel... hence, this throw-away page.}